Persuasive Email

First and Final Draft:

Subject: Bring Light to Puerto Rico

Dear, Mr. Jeff Bezos

I hope this email finds you well. My name is Juliene Rios and I am writing to you today with an urgent request for sponsorship. You may recall that I first met you in the observatory of the One World Trade Center, where we had a discussion about the necessity of inputting a substantial Electrical Power Grid in Puerto Rico.  As we have taken note of, Puerto Rico has been facing a significant electricity crisis for many years now, and the situation has only worsened in recent times.

As an Electrician and activist for human rights, I have personally witnessed the impact that this lack of access to reliable electricity has had on the lives of the people of Puerto Rico. Many families are left without power for days or even weeks at a time, severely affecting vital services like hospitals, schools, and businesses. The devastation caused by natural disasters, such as Hurricane Maria in 2017, has only added to the urgency of this issue.

To help Puerto Rico acquire the new electrical grids, I’m writing to you now to ask for your assistance financially. The implementation of new grids will not only provide dependable electricity to the people of Puerto Rico, but it will also create jobs and stimulate economic growth in the region.

As a wealthy and influential individual, I believe you have the power to make a significant impact in Puerto Rico. Your contribution would help fund the necessary infrastructure and technology needed to implement these new grids, providing a long-term solution to this pressing issue.

I urge you to consider this request carefully and make a meaningful contribution to this cause. Your generosity and support would make a huge difference in the lives of the people of Puerto Rico and would be a testament to your commitment to making a positive impact in the world.

If you agree to participate in this initiative, we should talk about the specifics over breakfast or dinner of your liking.

Thank you for taking the time to consider this request. I look forward to hearing from you soon. 

Warm Regards,

Juliene Rios